DawnBornilla
Hamish gives off this sad reluctant yearning vibe thats so palpable, real interesting subtext, however its a bit on the nose! Hamishs clarity and communicative nature creates a power dynamic that feels off kilter and the writer might have foregone some development on specifying each characters journey, centring the story on a goal, and defining the focal point of the central dramatic question and the thematic narrative. However, reading into Hamishs hesitance and Londons naïveté allows for some more complex readings, helpfully aided by some intuitive and clever direction. Discussing points of constructive growth around this student film could be very catalytic to the filmmakers understandings of storytelling; these techniques pique my curio...